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Broken Pieces... by ~Roxyangel22:iconRoxyangel22:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


There are times when life doesn’t fit right,
When the cracks in your heart don’t feel tight
It’s hard to search through the darkness to find the light.

You search, and search without a word
Working hard When your vision is at a blur
And the advice is, well, only something you’ve heard.

You defer what the heart feels when it’s right
thankful to make it through yet another night
Then you lose the exact meaning out of your sight.

You’re struggling to keep the up with the fight
And hoping somewhere it’s always going to be alright
Even, birds with broken wings still take flight.

There are times in life
You’re just broken
©2006-2009 ~Roxyangel22
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Author's Comments

Sometimes you cant pick up where you've left off... Sometimes it just seems broken.
But there isnt any meaning in this one! Just randome thoughts to start my day! :)
Enjoy

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*DrowningByWords Apr 19, 2006, 8:54:16 AM
aww beautifully written
may just be random thoughts but they
really ring true n relate to my mood of the past few days
like the imagery of the bird with broken wings still taking flight
which is so beautiful and shows the determination in survival
thats not just a part of human nature but throughout nature
xoxo
:heart: :+fav:

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Music Is True Love:love:You have never been in love/Until you've seen the stars/Reflect in the reservoirs:love:Book Lovers Of The World Unite!
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~Roxyangel22 Apr 19, 2006, 9:22:36 AM
That was my point! great reading into it! I know i hear you on that! Just dont forget how to fly! :)

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
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*DrowningByWords Apr 19, 2006, 10:08:32 AM
aww I won't =)
:airborne: theese might help =)
xoxoxo

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Music Is True Love:love:You have never been in love/Until you've seen the stars/Reflect in the reservoirs:love:Book Lovers Of The World Unite!
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~kreativekreations Apr 28, 2006, 9:43:22 AM
Yes sometimes in life you're just broken. It's amazing that you mentioned the birds with broken wings, cause here in India there was a song about a bird falling from the sky and in doing that he was telling the humans that you should smile, since tomorrow will come no matter what. And there is a line in which it is said that 'cause he lost his wings he learned to fly, it is one of my all time fave songs and reading your poem was like hearing it all over again.
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~Roxyangel22 Apr 28, 2006, 10:08:23 AM
yeah thats so true i agree with you! Or like "No birds can ever soar too high as long as he soars with his own wings"
:)

I appreciate you commenting my work!

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
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=MaliceTear Nov 28, 2006, 9:03:30 AM
I can relate to when you said sometimes you cant just pick up where you left off.

Love the line " Even, birds with broken wings still take flight." Lovely poem :hug:

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"Today, I realized that some of the most interesting and insightful people in my life are the ones who made me think, "What a weirdo…" when I first met them."

*pErplex-edNESS is my polar bear.
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