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“Like a Puppet”

I’ve lost how many times
I balance my heart strings
Ironing them out to have the perfect crease
s t r e t c h I n  g  them
Until they are perfectly aligned

I’m muttering “it’s fine!”
Yes this time!
And the next
( I don’t know)
Yes, I will be fine
(I hope so)
You do believe me don’t you?

The scuff will shine right out
And the dent is nothing to worry about
NEW- Just in;
“You can fix a broken heart”
(As long as the pieces don’t come apart)

Compulsively making it shine
To see your reflection
(as I’ve lost mine)
The crow obstructs my communication
As he screams on the phone lines
(Yes, I am just fine)

So pull the strings
Tie it in a bow
Throw it over your shoulder
Watch her dance
Hearts on the line to make it a chance.

Make it fit
Like paper origami
Lighting the spark
to keep it Lit
And let it shine

All along keeping the strings perfectly
Aligned
Because with all time
you know…
I am just fine.
©2006-2009 ~Roxyangel22
:iconroxyangel22:

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:iconmaximuslover:
Cool stuff :) it's a really good piece.

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Please, Please, Forgive me...
:iconyoursweetsix-six-six:
wow, the last verse. tear in my eye...

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your sweet six six six xxx
:iconkreativekreations:
This is beautifully written, and the feeling it conveys is one of hopeless hopes, again beautiful and well written.
:iconpussy-asbest:
I really like this one, severall passages sound familiar!
:icontaztitan85:
“You can fix a broken heart”
(As long as the pieces don’t come apart)

Love this part, it's awesome, love the whole piece, great work!!!

-Eric

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"Until that day... 'Til all are one..." -Optimus Prime

"If you can't do it in style, then don't bother doing it!" -Jazz

"I don't break the rules, I bend them... A lot." -Sideswipe
:iconroxyangel22:
Thank you very much! :)

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
:iconroxyangel22:
Thank you so much!

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
:iconroxyangel22:
Awww Thank you! I am glad you picked up on that! :)

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
:iconroxyangel22:
Aww, dont tear up on me... :( lol... thank you sweetie!

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie

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